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Apathy looks like a blank piece of paper,
A bland stare of an impassive mask.
He`s made people happy,
And may make you sad.
Apathy is invincible.
As everyone grows up,
He sits there as we change,
Void of action,
Frozen in age,
Very disdainful.
I wonder if his heart even beats...
When he looks into the mirror he sees loathing.
He is very conceited,
Unaware of his surroundings,
Apathy is a vacuum,
Void of all emotion.
He is cold in spirit,
At his death, there are no screams,
Nobody knew who he was.
No one cares!
(I would like this poem better if the last two lines were cut out, but i only have permission to spread it around if i leave it the way it was written, then again the chances of the writer seeing this are about none and even if he did he would not be able to do anything... still...) | | nice poem | | why are poets always writing depressing stuff? why don't they make a poem about flowers or clouds and not turn it into massive depression. | why are poets always writing depressing stuff? why don't they make a poem about flowers or clouds and not turn it into massive depression.
It is poem !!! :) | why are poets always writing depressing stuff? why don't they make a poem about flowers or clouds and not turn it into massive depression.
That is a mis coneception o.o i spelt that wrong but well you get the point, it is just assumed that all poetry is downbeat, but even rap is considerd poetry...
Not all of it is downbeat, just the stuff that is meant to be, witch is not even half of it.
Also note that beauty is in the eye of the beholder bla bla bla you see what you want to see bla bla bla, and this poem is not depressing at all o.o
(rather seems more like a character description of sasori or ulquirra to me...)
(or any student in a really boring class...) |
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