| Author | comments for the wiz_king story |
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| plz post the comments here |
| good till now :) |
| nice..keep up the good work :) |
| Nice :) |
real good man
keep up the good work :) |
| continue |
| new para added |
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| Nice:) |
uhh sorry guy but i read you were in 10th
i really dont think this 10th standard seeing you are in the elite skunders scourge.
I hope the continuation will be better.
I will tell you something skunder told me when i told him aboout my story 2 days before postingit in the forums.
You are not making the priest speak anything. It looks more like a summary because of this. The readers get more tense when the heroes are speaking instead of seeing a akind of a summary.
but if you were my age u would have sort of liked it
LOL |
| Good stuff! |
