| Author | Comments for my Works |
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| Post your comments here. |
| I am completely open to criticism |
| i dont like it whatever it is |
| Was the best i had never seen |
| Nice |
Its pretty good actually. My only suggestion - Please run a spell check in MS word. Well, there are some spelling mistakes, though not blunders in themselves, they give a bad impression to the readers. The same is with the punctuation - their usage is not appropriate in some places and you have missed a few of them here and there. Most of such errors could be corrected by a simple spell check in a word processor. Also, you have missed some articles in between.
Overlooking the above stuff, I feel it was great. An interesting read in fact. Keep it up :p |
Thank you, I would try to do better work next time. The thing is I dont have any Office software right now like Ms or open office, that is why these mistakes. Sorry and thank you.
for napalmi:
Can you please elaborate why you did not like it, so that I can improve. |
Very much looking forward to your next work. Well, if you don't have an office software, there are many free online sites that help you do it. Just google :p
i dont like it whatever it is
Well, his statement clearly says he hasn't either read the text or hasn't understood the same. Please keep up with your work and don't take the comments of those who haven't even read it seriously. |
