| Author | Tales from a kingdom [Discussion Topic] |
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Greetings fellow Lords and Ladies, yet again I'm here with one more petty attempt at writing stories. This would be a collection of short stories, with about 4-5 parts in each story. You can find it here:
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=2303447
Please do read it, post your feedback here and NOT at the creative works thread.Please go easy on me. I won't even call myself a novice writer, I'm just some guy who likes scribble his thoughts.
My first story is "Free at last?". I have posted the first part of it, and will post the others soon. I'm looking forward to your feedback. |
I liked the part where you descripe the prisoner's thoughts post-caught, full of regrets and turns in life he could have chosen.
Keep it up ! |
Part-2 of 'Free at last?' is here.
for Lord Hallion91:
Thank you very much for your kind words. |
| I'm amazed of your skill. It is so much better than the average stories here. Please continue as soon as you can. |
for Lord STB:
Thank you very much. I'm still learning. I posted my stories here in past but they had some major flaws. I have improved since then :) |
| Part-3 of 'Free at last?' is here. Hope you guys like it. |
| Good going. |
| Its really great, I like the way you use different words every time to describe, actually I am not too much into reading but I cant keep myself away from this xD Please continue as soon as you can. And great work :) |
The final part of "Free at last?" is here. Oh my god! How long it has been? This is what happens when an extremely busy man procrastinates. I apologize for the delay.
It was really rewarding experience writing this story. Please do give your feedback.
If I had any more ideas,next time I would finish the story as soon as possible.
If you had any ideas on the story, or just want to be a character in one of my stories. Just PM me or post it here.
Regards,
Jon. |
for Jon Battleborn:
This is gold Jon. Absolutely enjoyed it. |
| Ended too soon... Maybe later you could expand a bit more... It was going pretty well :) |
| This is gold |
for K5isback:
The intention was to write a short story. So I had to stop it somewhere :P
Thanks for the support.
for Haldin:
for The One Ring:
Thank you very much for your kind words. |
| Make a sequel to this short story please then :) The last part disappointed me :| I wanted it to go a bit further, the end came too fast for me ;) |
for K5isback
The idea was to show a bizzare event in the far end of the empire and not a saga.Not every character goes on to do great things. Most of them just try to not fall in muck. But I promise Yngvarr will make an appearance in future stories :D
Thank you so much for the honest feedback :) |
| Then Ill look forward to your future stories :) |
My second prose "The scaly source of all magic" is here.
All in one installment. The support from the readers have been amazing. Please give it a read and give me your feedback :) |
| Well done.. I have to commend your style of wording which goes along perfectly with the story. Maybe it was intended so, but i'm always tempted to see the other side of the curve and i think you may have been a little hasty towards bringing it completion. |
