Original:
Dear Lords and Laides,
Announcing the special Winter Sale! Starting today and through December 12, buy Diamonds and get +15% for free.
But that’s not all:
Buy a total of 25 Diamonds or more while this sale lasts and get uniq memorial gift artifact FREE!
Even better, buy a total of 50 Diamonds or more while this sale lasts and get a second uniq artifact FREE!
The unique artifacts is treated as a shop artifact and its parameters depend on the wearer’s combat level.
Thank you and have a good game!
I suggest instead:
Dear Ladies and Lords,
Announcing the special Winter Sale! Starting today and through December 12, buy Diamonds and get +15% for free.
But that’s not all:
Buy a total of 25 Diamonds or more while this sale lasts and get a unique memorial gift artifact for FREE!
Even better, buy a total of 50 Diamonds or more while this sale lasts and get a second unique artifact for FREE!
These unique artifacts are treated as shop artifacts and their parameters depend on the wearer’s combat level.
Thank you and have a good game! |
