| Author | Discussion : Creature's Life |
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Here we all can discuss about "Creature's Life " topic in creative works written by me.
Link - https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1855169&page=last |
| see lament of a poisoner under creative works. thats how a creatures life should be written |
for cottunbear:
I know i am not a good writer & had made some gramatical mistakes.
but plz don't compare me with some high-level writers. |
sry.
stick with the one character and go slow with him.
for cottonbear, come on, really? that just hurts.
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1847964
[Sorry, sry for posting that here, but then again u did kinda steal my idea. =D ] |
| Tomorrow, i will continue it. |
Tomorrow, i will continue it.
I mean, next week or when i am free. |
I'm not sure I quite understood what the story was about? You needed to make the opening much longer, as you are trying to set a basis for everyone to follow.
More description? Describe your setting! Sure it is set in the world of LordsWM and sure there is a cave in the scene, but more detail.
What you have created is a lightly touched on the surface story, and I would love to have you delve much deeper below the surface. |
for Dizbe:
thank you for your suggestion :) |
| [Post deleted by moderator Zyanya // ] |
+9 : plz avoid the post.
Actually:
Story has been updated !
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1855169 |
