Author | poem on elves |
WE R THE ELVES.
As swiftly as the shadows we elves strike.
and among the tress our bowmen fight.
Through the forests our keepers run.
We see our faeries dancing in the sun.
Our sprites gleam in the moonlight.
As light as a feather our unicorns ride.
Our treefolk walk majestically in the woods.
Our elite forest keepers battledance beautifully and then the enemies r screwed
And out of the tress arrows shoot.
Our grandmaster bowmen aim at our enemie's boot.
Our anchorites and druids who concentrate on magic.
Have everything based on their logic. |
very nice poems
and a dark elf wrote ethem ,lol |
well if you know the DE are originaly "evil elves", they rebeled to the original, their king practiced dark magic or something like that... |
for Yinx:
i know that i was just being funney andy way very nice poems |
haha, its all rhymning until
Our treefolk walk majestically in the woods.
Our elite forest keepers battledance beautifully and then the enemies r screwed
lol, still great |
3. Where do you get your information --> "they rebeled to the original, their king practiced dark magic or something like that"
What is this WoW? If we're going to speak about DE then take a more reliable and older source of true DE by reading some of RA Salvatore and the Drizzt Do'Urden series.
and rhyming isn't necessary all the time. many a great poem purposely stays away from the iambic tone seemingly required for 'good poetry'. maybe a lil more elven tribute? ;D |
sorry to burst your bubble but
"moonlight" and "ride" does not rhyme.
But who cares anyways :D |
im so jeolous of u!
great poem...whats the secret? |