| Author | faction stories |
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these will be stories about being a lord in control of an army with in his race
knight
It had been a long journey and the commander was thinking about what will happen when he reaches the outpost.When the commander had reached the outpost he realised that the small outpost had been changed into a giant outpost which had all types of troops.He saw some farmers working the land to provide food for the troops,archers standing on high walls that allowed them to see far into the distance and saw swordsmen training against each other.
he found the person in charge and commented on how the outpost was lacking in troops> the person told him that the main empire was busy fighting demons in the south
The commander had been sent here to stop the invasion of orcs and goblins he had heard that they were in many numbers and that he had to turn the outpost into an area capable of protecting itself.
he spent his first few days with out any events happening on his fifth day more people had come builders
more soon |
| sorry to cut in but I think you should add a bit more detail, unless you're trying to keep the story as brief as possible? |
| I agree with navimegame, also, you might want to focus a little more on grammar ( like capatalizing words in the begginnign of a sentence:P) |
Elf
Long has been the quest of man to seek power. This so called quest of man made him meet a totally new race. A race which was almost identical to himself. A Race which was much more wiser though. This race was known as the elves. The most ancient warriors, the most unique warriors; they are sought to be those, who know the deepest secrets of Space, Earth and Life. |
| Outpost, keep, sentry, tower, castle, settlement. To avoid overuse of word outpost. Or at least thats what the teachers had told me at high school about writing. |
| ahah. space elves ftw |
knight part 2
The builders had come from one of the larger cities that the knights were in control of. They had been sent here due to stories that the outpost was barely able to keep it's self safe from the surrounding invaders.The next day they set to work on building a church,the process was long and hard. All of the farmers had been working hard because they knew that if they worked hard enough they would become the elite monks.
On the 12th day a group of goblins had decided to attack the outpost.There was a call to arms and the farmers were panicking but the commander had sent twenty five bowmen to the top of the wall where they had a clear view of the invaders. The gate was also raised to allow the swords men to charge the enemy. Although it was hardly neccesary the commander who had seen trickery from the goblins before had decided better safe than sorry. When the goblins where in range the bowmen fired there heavy bows at the goblins many fell but still they came. The bowmen needed time to reload there arrows but the goblins still marched forwards. The goblins were quite close when the bowmen were done. With another shot they killed the majority of the goblins. The closest ones had came within the reach of swords men who cut them down to pieces. When the fighting had stopped the gat was raised but one bowman had noticed wolves.The gate was quickly lowered but the bowmen had no chance to reload. The wolves who were incredibly fast were well past the bowmen's shooting range and the swords men stood there ready to face them. The sword men were heavy defenders but the wolves were stronger attackers. The line was broken but still the commander did not worry because he knew the monks had finished praying. The gate was broken and the wolves charged in only to feel the monks holy wrath. The wolves were cut down to size by this attack but the remainder still charged. The monks had anticipated this move ment and brought their hammers onto the wolves head's which knocked the goblins off their mounts.the goblins were running around they were too fast for the stalwart swords men or the blessed monks and the archers knew that they could accidently injury a ally. When the farmes saw what was going on the joined in the battle seeing as how they were the only unit fast enough to catch them they stuck their farming tools into the goblins quickly killing them. After the choas and the metal from the enemies weapons was collected they were made into polearms for the farmers who had joined the battle |
