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| Author | The journal of a mediocre knight[feedback] |
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| Good job buddy!! :-) | No need ot go quicker. A good story comes when its done patiently. Arpit, nice start. Or iw ould say a blazing start. At times its tough to understand that its a new scene so from the further posts, put something like:
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this after the earlier scene ends and a new one comes.
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Player banned by moderator Lord STB until 2013-05-14 08:55:29 // FR 4.2.1 / Long string violation | for kushagra5:
Actually the story is in continuous form, since, it is a narration there is no "meanwhile" in it.
Whenever I want to shift the location. I just start from new post.
Thx for your feedback would be more careful when I change locations. I'm glad you liked it. |
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