| Author | The journal of a mediocre knight[feedback] |
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Hi guys in the community of scribes and wordsmiths I have made a petty amateurish attempt to tell a story.
It is here:
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1970503
As I repeat I am an amateur and I do a lot of reading though and always wanted to write something of myself.All the praises and critics too, are welcome :)
Try not scar me for life :P
Hope you don't get bored and my apologies if it wasn't upto the mark. |
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for speed_dragon:
thx:)
If anybody of you wondering about what type of timeline I'm using. I am using the gregorian calender to mention dates. I saw it in skyrim and I had loved it ever since :) |
i'd like to read further too ;) i'd say its slightly above the amateurish kind on so many levels... Language is too simple, which is again sensible... although with the increasing text, i'd like you to re-read ur job and take note of the rare pieces of errors in narration, (but dont ask me why i said this...as i wont be able to pin point such errors myself...its just some glitch in reading somewhere in the middle of post 1)
Write more sooner :)
Good luck for the part to come ;) |
Its good bro :)
I really liked reading it
Waiting for more ;) |
it's nice... hope you post the rest soon..
dats something most of the people don't do... they just post the beginning and leave it there.. would love to read the rest!! |
thank you all for such kind feedback :)
Yes I'm aware of the fact that there are some loose ends. Maybe devoting some more time on the each part would make it better :) |
| great job, keep inspiring us ^_^ |
for -Rufus-:
Thank you for the encouraging words.
New entries have been added. I hope it is upto the mark:)
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1970503 |
| Just answering a question. I plan to post a new entry every week. I feel i can move past my anateurish lvl if i devote some more time on it. Do recommend your friends to read and give their honest feedback. It might be helpful to ke in so many ways. |
One word : Awesome.
Its really good :) |
| Oh thank you. I know it is way behind a writer lvl but i really appreciate you guys encouraginng me. |
| liking it) wish you could be faster with the upcoming parts, hehe....and please do somthing bad with Baweja in the story... jus kidding :D |
interesting, just now read it :) i am always curious what happen for that 2 councilors, and of course queen !!!
i hop you cover that too |
for Poison Ivy:
Thank you :)
i am always curious what happen for that 2 councilors, and of course queen !!!
Uh.. Let us see what could be done :) |
| Sorry for not posting for awhile. I was on vacations. Finally back home and woukd be coming back with a new entry soon. Ithis ie the en try i am really anticipating and want you to read. Thanks for the suport and encouraging pms. |
Hello new entry have been posted. It is only the half of what I intended to post since, it's been time and I should be giving something to the readers.
I will post the next half soon(most probably tomorrow). Plz do tell me how is it? Thank you for the support :) |
When does this Mediocre Knight of mine turns into the handsome prince who rescues the princess from the tower.
Just Kidding, good work bro |
| Thanks for posting..hope to read more from you. |
for barb_ruler:
Thx mate the mediocre knight will remain being mediocre for awhile :p
for Loafoant:
Well thank you for reading!! I will try to be quicker with upcoming parts from now on. |
