| Author | [Feedback] The tale of a (un)dead man |
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| Post all your feedback regarding the story here :) |
| One post released. |
Er..here's the story link -_-
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1999905 |
| Looking good ;) |
| Great job mate. Keep posting :) |
| Thanks guys ! Will start working more on it,once I get free in RL :) |
| More!!! nice job |
| Looks intricating =) I would ask not to push it, and just let it flow whenever inspiration hits you, that way the story feels natural and much closer to perfection. So, don't get pressed by the Lords demanding continuation NAOW =D |
| Fine start. Maybe its too early to say anything |
for TraumatizedSoul:
sure ;)
for Arctic: Thanks for reply,mate.I agree with quote]ask not to push it, and just let it flow whenever inspiration hits you.Writing this small part of the story took me a month :-p
for kushagra5: Thanks,mate.Hope it is fine even at end :)
BTW,closing the story thread for now,till next post so that it doesn't become obsolete. |
New installment :
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1999905 |
Big twist..
Lets see how mar'c handles that.. |
| good. Its somewhat intriguing. Infact, Bbut i would say, you know its too early for such a big shock. After sometime you will find you cant go beyond 100 real story book pages. Be a much more descriptive and you get the nobel prize |
Be a much more descriptive and you get the nobel prize
u r thinking of too far :P..
read frm the view of a good entertaining story.. |
Oh ok. I just want to say, this is more like story writing in school where you are allowed max 1000 words. LOL.
10/10 if i was your english teacher |
| ^ hehe thx mate..i'm taking it slow with chapter 2.but I hope to post in a week or two ;) |
New installment added. At last got around to writing it. Waiting for feedback :)
https://www.lordswm.com/forum_messages.php?tid=1999905&page=0#37035047 |
| Not normally into reading these sorts of stories online but I took a look. Anyone incorporating the term "scumbag" twice in the first paragraph of a story is good with me. More murder, more scumbags, more HATE!!!!! |
| @Modi : Haha ! You wait, mate there are lot more of those where they came from. Too bad the forum's is a bit censored.. :( |
Too bad the forum's is a bit censored
Too bad the forum is a bit censored you mean?
fellow Writer, your story is going well and typos happen! |
