| Author | Elf to Knight |
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Well Old topic is closed , b'coz of grammar error.
Here's the story now :
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This is the story of Shinako (my old char) and sry my new char and there connectivity on hw they becoem one .
The story of AN ELF to A KNIGHT.
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CHAPTER - I A distorded end.
As i swept through the city gates and to the frost lands outside, I remembered my Childhood which I spent as an elf in the Sylvan lands of Azuruia..How i was loved by my friends and family ...
But now I was soon pushed out of the Sylvan gate I fell to the ground.
'Argh, juz leave me u !" I stammered to the guard who juz
pushed me . I got up and went on...
I am Shinako , who was driven out of the sylvan kingdom for a mistake i committed unknowingly and this my story on hw I became a knight from an elf.
I was exiled from Sylvans and I was deprived of my men and was left with little of my faireis and Fks and was ordered to go and change my faction.
This hurted me badly as whole my life I loved the essence of Elven culture and their might,so I continued to live as an elf until..
Once after getting defeated by some lifeless gargs, I was ambushed by some Elven sentries , who found I was still a elf , so they took me to the Elven king Azarath. He ordered me to be transfromed into other faction by sending me into The PORTAL OF ASCATION . They pushed me inro it and then with a flash of a second...I travelled into a other world
PART II soon to be written *(I mean edited from the old). |
| still some errors but not as bad s the last one |
| cool |
for lukeman56789:
for Rafen:
Thank You !
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PART II - A new memory
As I got up , barley able to open my eyes, the atmosphere was different it wasnt like in a elf camp.I juz then rwalised that i was pushed through the PORTAL OF ASCATION and b'coz if which i ....i... was transformed into a knight !
I hardly could believe it , as I hated them the most.I then the rule of the portal : that it changes u into the one who u hate. but as i got out,the scenario was different.
"Hey , Novice knight" said a tall man (who i thkn was the captain),he called himself Tutoriadsgue (Tutoria - seg) and said he would guide me in camp which was located nearly the bushy jungles of Afrozia.
Then he told me to get ready, to go for a patrol.I changed my dress and went and noticed them giving away badges , so when i went to collect my badge , and then i went to the patrol
After the day , it all happened so fast I wasnt able to recollect my old memories but couldn't.I remembered my name , my previous faction but couldn't
recollect wat i did there.I juz then realised my old memories had faded away ....
FACTS TO BE KNOWN :-
CHAPTER III WILL BE VERY INTERESTING ;). |
| still lots of typos :P |
| Not "a elf" but "an elf" .. sorry to write this .. forgive me .. no offense .. ^^ |
for RandhyTheDarks:
Np =)
Thank you for correcting me . ^^ |
still lots of typos :P
Just typing in Hurry Burry . |
still lots of typos :P
Just typing in Hurry Burry .
Then why hurry? Write a bit in Word, check it then post. Imo, shorthand is good in chat, not good stories.
Posting for the sake of posting... :/ |
| I Don't have enough time like you shebali ! |
| Kindly don't count _my_ time. And if you lack time for something - why do it at all? Posting for the sake of posting... :/ |
for Shebali:
Ok , leave this topic ! First say me "Do you like this Story" Compared to the last ? |
for sry:
No. |
for Shebali:
I Don't know why ? No ?
Can you give me the reason ? |
You don't want to hear my reasons -_-
One advice of mine went wasted anyway... |
I must say only this thing
when will you write another chapter or will you both keep fighting a mod wars in this forum! |
when will you write another chapter
Well, this one goes to sry obviously.
will you both keep fighting a mod wars in this forum!
What wars? A question was asked, a question was answered. That's all. |
| it seems more like a quarrel |
when will you write another chapter
Soon.....
will you both keep fighting a mod wars in this forum!
it seems more like a quarrel
LOL ! |
