| Author | The invasion of earth |
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I decided to write a science fiction story instead of a medieval one This story is similar to Universe at war story
Bio:Humans
Humans are the race that lives one Earth
The Invasion
It was October 7th 2012 the Earth satellites detected three big flying saucers that stopped below the Earth atmosphere suddenly they fired beams at every country in the globe ......
chapter 2 is coming soon |
| make it a little longer plz and its ok |
| this is just an introduction next chapter will be longer |
| lol so short |
| I dont quite understand the sentence "below the Earth atmosphere", but I quess you mean the lower orbit. I think I have seen a movie or few about flying saucers. Keep going, sci-fi is cool. |
chapter 2 is coming soon
Where is chapter one? :) |
| dude work on it a bit lol way 2 short |
sry for some typing mistakes in the 1st message
if any body need a bio about the characters i can post them
now
Chapter 1:Rescue the president
The American army sent colonel Randal Moore to rescue the president from the capitol building and gave him some marine squads while they were marching suddenly some civilians was running in their way calling for help and behind them appeared 3 small grayish forms of aliens that had big heads small body and tall limbs.
Soldier:What are those things?!
Colonel Moore:FIRE!!
Thought they killed them suddenly another 3 appeared from no were and started firing at colonel Moore squads
Soldier:from were they came?
Moore:kill them
the aliens fired at one of them with 1 shoot he suddenly became a clean skeleton and then at last they could kill them;they continued marching till they found a fuel truck and around it there was like 8 another but this time they was assisted with 2 big aliens they were like a building with a main floor and floor1 with an armor that covered all their body and head just with their limbs showing of and armored with a strange big gun
Colonel Moore:ATTACK!!
the soldiers started attacking but it was useless the aliens armored was to heavy that there were barely no scratch the aliens started shooting with their guns that appeared to be shotgun the squads was heavily damaged and skeletons was on the ground
Colonel Moore:take cover i will blow that fuel truck!
he throw a grenade on the fuel truck and in exploded taking all the aliens around it to their graves;after marching a while.
HQ:Moore are you hearing me?
Colonel Moore:yes i am still here
HQ:what is your status?
Colonel Moore:i had better days but is there any news about the rest of the globe?
HQ:no Europe and China forces are pinned down be aliens
Colonel Moore:Damn,Do you have any good news?
HQ:there is some forces in front of you led by captain Jackson(truly i forgot his name and rank so i randomized him lol).
Colonel Moore:so he is still live.
after a couple of minutes luckily to him he didn't see a Aliens he approaches a small military camp
Jackson:Randal i didn't ever being so happy to see you
Colonel Moore:your status?
Jackson:we are ok and we have some Humvees too add some fire power
Colonel Moore:good then come with me we are near the capitol builing
while they continued marching see stopped near a park were there was 4 big aliens
Moore:not again soldiers fire at them before they start firing
then a fight started the aliens started shooting and moving closer to the squads when one of them approached a soldier he hit him with his shotgun and fired at him (this is the grunt tactic fire approach your enemy hit him with your tipped end shot gun to stop him from firing at you then fire lol)
Colonel Moore:kill them fast
after killing the aliens and suffering heavy loses they continued marching while facing some resistance from small aliens(i will stop calling them like that now see small aliens lost ones big aliens grunts and super big aliens brutes).
HQ:Moore can you here me?
Colonel Moore:yes i can do you have new news?
HQ:yes Sergeant Willard is approaching your position with some reinforcments
Sergeant Willard: hi Moore it was a long time since we met.
General Moore:Willard is that you but i thought you retired?!
Sergeant Willard:it will take you more than that to make me retire(he is riding in a M1A1 Battle Tank its an experimental tri-barreled gatling tank that fires something like bombs and Moore has a mini gatling gun).
then they start to move again they cross near a 8 floor building that have 2 big brutes that have a naked big body with a lot of muscles and a hideous mutated form on the building.
Soldier:What are those things?!!!
Colonel Moore:I don't know and i don want to stay to know move on but with caution.
the 2 brutes jump they land on 2 of the Humvees and easily crush them
Colonel Moore:fire at them tanks fire and stand in their way the battle start |
| OMG half of what i posted is deleted NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
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| this is horrible |
OK, we have some squads, fireworks, where is the story? In fact isnt it a rewriting of some PC game or a movie?
In fact one question pops into my mind. When the aliens solved the multiple problems to make space travel possible why would they mess with hand to hand combat? Are there any military problems that cannot be solved with bombardment(especially from orbit)/VX gas/biological/neutron weapons. When we can kill each other without need to see each other why the aliens couldnt? It reminds me a bit of a worst sci-fi movie I have ever seen - Signs with Mel Gibson. Any alien problem can be solved with baseball bat and garden hose according to that movie :-) |
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boring :P
don't try to type out the whole game believe me it'll consume a whole lot of time |
| well i think i will block this one and rewrite it in better form |
| closed by Romiah (2009-03-08 14:55:31) |
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