| Author | Please check my grammar |
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I did this story in my last "gerak gempur" which means uproar movement, It's like a test/exam like that
Jamal is a kind and generous boy that lives in my neighbourhood. He always help people where ever he is. He, too, is my classmate, we learn in the same school. Jamal always punctual.
I'll continue please check the intro |
Jamal is a kind and generous boy that lives in my neighbourhood. He always helps people where ever he goes. He is my classmate too since we study in the same school. Jamal is always punctual.
Try to lengthen the last sentence else it feels rather orphaned from the general flow of the sentence |
Jamal always punctual.
This is the place that confuses me, why put is? |
This is the place that confuses me, why put is?
because punctual is an adjective
Jamal is a kind and generous boy who lives in my neighbourhood. |
| I might bring home the whole essay tommorow if my teacher allows me. Not sure if she already make some corrections already but can you correct it if my teacher didn't see the false because she wears a spectacle(foureyes) |
I might bring home the whole essay tommorow if my teacher allows me. Not sure if she already make some corrections already but can you correct it if my teacher didn't see the false because she wears a spectacle(foureyes)
I might be able to bring the entire essay home tomorrow if allowed by my teacher. I am not sure is she has already made some corrections, but could you be so kind as to correct the essay if my teacher did not spot the mistake as she is short-sighted and wears spectacles (and thus is nick-named 'foureyes') |
| How do you people level up to that level of english? I always watch english movies, cartoons and games but things doesn't go the way I wanted. Moreover, I got the top english in class. I "talked" using english on chat, forums and battlechat but my english mark is still approximately 80-90 |
| Well we speak it everyday, all day long and we have taken and learned since we where born (well most of us anyway). |
where ever
I believe wherever is one word. |
actually english langue is very easy to learn cuz it`s letter have a diffrentshape from other langues and it`s easy to tell apart of them ,but the english grammer is very diffulct to learn you have to read alot of books till you can learn it
and "lerning english from childhood" people think it is easy but it is very hard luckly i`m smart enough to learn it since age 8(half of it)
and if you want to know how good you are in english go to any britch chat cuz these people can`t do anything wronge in english even if they do want to
for Head-Shot:
80-90 is bad 95-100 that is acceptable
for Omega22:
wherever is the corrst one
where ever means something diffrently |
| and for head shot this is your second time you post a topic about english don`t you have other lessons to post about,cuz english is way to easy to make topics abut them |
#7
How do you people level up to that level of english? I always watch english movies, cartoons and games but things doesn't go the way I wanted. Moreover, I got the top english in class. I "talked" using english on chat, forums and battlechat but my english mark is still approximately 80-90
Movies, cartoons, and games are terrible ways to learn proper English. They are good if you want to learn the culture and slang, but if you wanted to learn proper English for essay writing, then you need to read novels and practice writing.
#8
Well we speak it everyday, all day long and we have taken and learned since we where born (well most of us anyway).
That doesn't mean anything at all. Most students who only know English are terrible at it and only sound good to ESL (English Second Language) students. |
| I got it, The essay is in my note book. I'll C-n-P it now |
