| Author | lords of war story by me 11year old. comments and suggestion |
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so guys post ur thoughts here-
hope u liked first chapter second coming soon. |
| nice like i said sorry for commenting there |
| its ok. |
k.
will post second chapter 1 moment |
| chapter 3 coming tommorow |
| forum mods delete post no.2 and 4 in the real topic plz |
| loved it cant wait for chapter3 |
| ihave decided my story till the end but still suggest what will be good but plz do it here |
chapter 3 posted.
plz post comments here. |
wiz_king
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6 2012-06-15 09:36:03
but dark factions in one team and light factions in one team 3vs4
and then put one part of light faction to betrayal so equal forces and then put dark elf queen to death and have a hearted king take place and help light forces and you choose the winning team appropriately
beginnings in a story are the most difficult and you have done an awesome job putting it together till now
dont end the story after the war ends
wiz_king
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7 2012-06-15 09:37:07
i am having jibbs that we might have another skunder along with us who might give us and admins a great story to think about dude rock this story |
brisinger7
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4 2012-06-15 08:23:49
nice
eddyimmanuel
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5 2012-06-15 09:32:57
nice:) |
| chapter 4 uploaded |
| nice till now |
| CHAPTER 5 UPLOADED |
this story has to be named.
after i put up chapter 6 and the last chapter 7. tommorow you can suggest a title for this story |
| Wow i got great comments from alexanderthehit. he said if i wrote this at 11 i am a protergree thnx man |
| Make Arctic's hand grow again in the sequel, I would hate to see him without a hand... |
| HAHAHAHA |
| no more comments amazing |
nyc for 11 yr old bt u need to choose words sincerely and much better words need to be placed
one can make out its an amateur writer |
