| Author | Lord's of War and Money Poem |
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Lord's WM is a really great game!
I think it deserves much more fame...
You can choose between many faction's,
and make an account (Congragulation's!)
You complete a hunt and earn a Hunter Broadsword...
Now you're set up for a journey in which you will never get bored...
Skill your way through the first 2 levels with ease,
And at Level 3, earn a magic treat...
As you embark Level 5, major decision's are to be made...
What ever you choose, you're never bound to fail..
Have a go at the Mercenaires Guild, it will sure be your skill's test...
It doesn't matter if you lose,just try a different quest...
Or maybe have a go at Blacksmithing,
Even though its a little tiring...
Whatever happens, stand tall...
And know you're the best hero of them all...
Thank You, Hope you have enjoyed...
R3B3L |
| Please post feedback on how I can improve... |
| Nice one! :). |
| I enjoyed it, thanks :) |
| Great one :) Loved it....you have described everything for the beginner :) |
| There is so much detail about how this games shapes initially for a Lord. Nice one :) |
| Pretty cool man, good job :) |
Really nice I enjoyed it:)
Hope you write about further lvls too :) |
| I enjoyed it, thanks :) |
| There is so much detail about how this games shapes initially for a Lord. Nice one :) |
Whatever happens, stand tall...
And know you're the best hero of them all...
Great words .. nearly what eminem told ... loved those words thank you for it |
| Thank You Very Much, I hope to write about future levels when i reach them... ( which will be hopefully soon...) |
| Love it awesome! |
for R3B3L:
Nice idea, good content, keep it up!
Everyone hae their own style for poems, so if you use rhymes, try all of them to sound nicely and also try to keep line lenghts with similar amount of syllabs. Third, try not to make too long lines.
Below is IMO most 'sound part':
Lord's WM is a really great game!
I think it deserves much more fame...
You can choose between many faction's,
and make an account (Congragulation's!)
Good luck :) |
Thanks for the advise, Elrond. It is much appreciated... :D
Glad that you enjoyed it... |
It's great :)
Yea, more levels, or even other factions? :) |
or even other factions?
Oooh, I never thought of that. It seems like a good idea...
Thanks |
| closed by R3B3L (2013-02-28 21:16:33) |
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