| Author | I wrote a poem |
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hey guys
I wrote a poem about knees. I call it "knees"
Knees
I have one on each leg
They are brilliant at bending
The fun I can have with them
Seems never ending
I can skip, I can kick
I can jump in the air
My knees are so wonderful
And they came as a pair
I remember this guy in school
His mum was a Jehavoh
She had false knees
She used to fall over
Did I.. did I write good? |
| First time, go easy! ;_; |
| Nice one :P |
| yup, good one buddy :) |
| Nice nice and I must say you have chosen a completely different subject from the regular ones :) |
Nice, I'm very bad at these things... so for a beginner like me it would feel a lot better if you use better formation.
I have one on each leg, they are brilliant at bending;
The fun I can have with them Seems never ending.
I can skip, I can kick, I can jump in the air
My knees are so wonderful and they came as a pair.
The next part needs much improvement, and also feels incomplete (kinda?)
I remember this guy in school
His mum was a *Jehovah*
She had false knees
She used to fall over |
for Loafoant:
for eddy_immanuel:
for ElfPride:
thanks guys! I was looking for inspiration but didnt know all I had to do was look down.
for virtual_vitrea:
I appreciate the criticism mate. Next time I will try better. |
but didnt know all I had to do was look down.
rofl XD |
| Looking down again I think I can write one more poem. *huehuehue* |
Halfway through my other poem. Not sure whether I should post it or not.
Maybe offensive to some (*who?* Idk bro, a group called someone!).
Don't wanna get banned. ;_; |
