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drunked drunk :D
sooo switch checks your spelling and grammar?:D
Yes and help me to changed several words. | | good story!some mistakes in english though. | | keep it up brother.............but one more spelling mistake and I shall break your fangs with my axe.............. | spelling mistakes arent the most important thing. though if u have microsoft Word u can fix alot of those mistakes just by fixing it there.
besides that, work on the story a lil more. I'd love to see what happens to our 'hero' =D | Prison,9:30 PM
A young female warrior begins her journey deep into the depths of the local jail.She is in search of the Supreme Demon who was once called a Night Elf, as well as her great-granduncle,Illidan Stormrage.
Several guards wave their hands as she approached and began to walk off deeper into the jail complex. To not make anyone suspicious of her, she waved back as well, smiling a smile she knew they would not have seen in the dim lighting of the torches on the walls.
Most of the guards that have been assigned to this section of the cell seem to left for other parts of the jail on patrol and all that remain are 2 guards. As she approached, she saw that one of them was deep in sleep and she smiled to herself. Lucia slowly shifted herself such that her hand was hidden from the guards and began casting a magic arrow spell targeting the guard that wasn't sleeping. Slowly, with the skill of an adept Night Elf, she crept past the guard who was awake, swung her hand out and with whispered words of power sent a white arrow of pure magic right through the back of the unsuspecting guard. Lucia relaxed herself as the the guard's body crashed to the stone floor with a sickening thud.
The sleeping guard was awaken by the sound and flusteredly looked around. Her eyes stopped on the dead body on floor and her jaw dropped. Lucia returned to her combat stance and got ready for any possibility.
"What happen?" asked the guard hurriedly as her noticed Lucia standing there
"Intruder! A night elf appeared suddenly around the corner and struck her with a magic arrow. She took off in that direction" replied Lucia, quickly adopting a tense and flustered demeanor. "Quickly! She ran that way." Lucia shouted and pointed towards the way she came from
The guard, not realizing that Lucia was the intruder and the murderer of her partner, began to run off in the direction Lucia pointed, drawing her weapon as she picked up her pace.
Without wasting another second, Lucia cast another magic arrow and ended the poor guard's miserable existence. "That's what sleeping on the job gets you" Lucia whispered softly to no one in particular.
Lucia waved her hands in the air, tracing arcane signs of warding in front of her and locked up the entrances with an invisible barrier of pure magical force. Feeling safe with no one for anyone to disturb her, she walked deeper into the cells until, at last, she found the cell she had been looking for.
Inside the cell, there was nothing but 4 plain stone walls and a few scattered bones piled in the corner. Opening herself to the arcane magics that swam through the area, Lucia sensed a disturbance on one of the walls and proceeded to remove a loose brick from the wall. As Lucia pulled the brick out, the walls began to shift and twist away, reforming themselves magically into a tunnel that lead deeper into the cell.
Suddenly, before she could set foot into the newly-formed passage, a strange voice echoed out through the tunnel "Who is that? Who dares to enter my cell unannounced and unwelcome?"
Without saying a word, Lucia stepped into the passageway and went on, ignoring the question. There were better things to do than to talk to a disembodied voice.
Secret Cells,10:30PM
Lucia noticed a gigantic black demon that was chained in the middle of the inner room as she cleared the tunnel and entered into the secret room proper.
"Who are you? You must be very brave to enter the Great Demon's Cell alone like this" roared Illidan as he strained against the chains that bound him. Whether it was to impress Lucia or if it was just a subconscious movement, Lucia couldn't tell.
"I am your brother,Furion's, great granddaughter." replied Lucia, not showing a hint of fear or concern with regards to the presence of a demon before her. | Oh damn.Skunder.You give them a hint of the future part of the story.
(The latest part is edited by Takesister) | keep it up brother.............but one more spelling mistake and I shall break your fangs with my axe..............
Bro.My fangs will grow back. | WARNING:THIS PART IS UNEDITED.(Maybe Takesister forgot this part)
"Hmm,interesting.So why you seek me?"ask Illidan.
"The King of Night Elves were killed by supreme dark witches name Alicia.She put all male Night Elves into sleep including your brother.But only 1 male left,which is my father.Just before I met you.Alicia success killing my father.All left is a wisp.I seek help to defeat that witches."explain Lucia.
"Amazing,the title King is not simply gain.Hmm,wait."said Illidan.
Using magic hand,Illidan give Lucia an orb.
"Go to north,show this to the sun while facing the sea.You will summon a asisstant of mine.She help me when I escape."said Illidan.
Hell,??:??
"Yes,I win it all!"said Treasurer Greed.
"Damn you.I will get you next time"said Advisor Lust.
"It's getting boring.I m going out of Hell"said Dark Knight Pride. | i didnt under stand the last part of it
Hell,??:??
"Yes,I win it all!"said Treasurer Greed.
"Damn you.I will get you next time"said Advisor Lust.
"It's getting boring.I m going out of Hell"said Dark Knight Pride.
what this suppose to mean ?
any way its nice keep going | | Oh just wait.The second part will be here in a minute. | Here is where it contiune.Somehow it got too long so it got cut off.
"Hey! There's no way you're going to leave like that.What would happen if Lord Lucifer summoned his court together and found out that you are not here?" asked Treasurer Greed.
"Well, if Messenger Envy had received any orders from Lord Lucifer, we wouldn't BE sitting here on our respective behinds playing cards" replied Dark Knight Pride.
The Dark Knight turned and began his walk to the Portal that led to the Human World, not letting any more talk from Treasurer Greed stop him.
Suddenly, a gigantic pot-bellied blue demon wielding a club in its right hand appeared before Dark Knight Pride and bellowed "Nobody is allowed to leave the boundaries of Hell without Lord Lucifer's permission or order. Once you leave, you will be considered an outcast, an outsider, and may never come back to Hell again!"
"Get out of my way,Gluttony. I will leave and you can';t stop me" warned Dark Knight Pride as he stared Gluttony straight in the eye.
"No! " replied Gate Keeper Gluttony.
Dark Knight Pride swiftly cast Magic Punch, targeting Gate Keeper Gluttony's rotund form and severely injuring Gluttony.
Without sparing a look at his friend, Dark Knight Pride walked straight through the Portal and into the Human World.
Location : Raindradom
Time: 3:28 PM
"Muhuhahaha!! All of you are going to die writhing in pain as you grovel at my skeletal feet!" screeched Kale the Lich.
"You ungrateful child! Only your death at my sword can ever come close to fully repaying your debts to this realm!" bellowed Commander Kylrin from behind on the top of the Great Wall of Raindradom.
"Attack! My warriors, Attack with all your might!" he commanded all the men that were gathered beside him.
As Commander Kylrin's command, Hails of arrows rained down from the walls of the castle.But the army of Undead ignored the arrows as the shafts just flew straight through their dessicated bodies without any effect.The undead continued to climb up the wall unhindered and the rear ranks began beating down on the 4 gates of Raindradom.
"Damn it! The Undead horde seem endless and unrelenting. Hmm, I have an idea! Men! Use fire arrows this time. Ready? Attack!" shouted Commander Kylrin again.
This time, the archers dipped their arrows in oil and lit them on fire. Within seconds, the night sky was lit with blazing streaks of flame as the archers let loose their volley.
With the fire setting the undead aflame, they became more dangerous, more deadly to all they touch.But yet, despite all that, some of the zombies and skeletons soon turned into piles of ash as the fire did it's work.
"Oh yes! We did it! We did it! We have found the way to defeat the undead horde!"cheered the soldiers.
But Commander Kylrin knew this wasn't over, wasn't a victory at all.The number that they had killed was just a small fraction of the greater undead army.
"Order all the labourers to make a brick wall, a rampart of sorts."commanded Commander Kylrin, hoping to stem the flow of undead
But it was too late.The undead had breached one of the gates. Several zombies and apprentice necromancers streamed into the city.They begun killing the innocent citizens behind the walls and raising them into zombies and bolstering the undead ranks.
"In just a few moments, Raindradom will be mine! Muhuhahaha!!" laughed Kale.
Suddenly,the King of Raindradom appeared on the palisades of the castle and turned to face Kale.
"Stop now. I do not want to kill you, Kale. Please end this madness." pleaded the old King.
"Madness! What do you have that can kill me? You just another old doddering fool who cannot admit defeat." boasted Kale.
"WITH THIS!" shouted the King.The King pulled out a crystal clear orb from within his robes and lifted it high above | "That... that is...Oh no!. RUN MY MINIONS, BEFORE IT REACHES YOU! RUN BEFORE THE LIGHT COMES!" screamed Kale desperately.
The orb begun to fly up into the sky and flew straight towards the top of the tallest fortress of the land which stood in the middle of the entire kingdom.
The light emitting from the orb quickly expanded soon reached Kale as he fled, hurting Kale greatly.
The pain forced Kale to transform back to his true form, that of a necromancer, as he slumped to the ground and fell unconscious from the sheer torture the light was causing him. The king sent 2 cavalry to capture Kale and send him in chains into prison.
Location: Prison
Time: 12:00PM
The King slowly walked into the cell that held Kale, looking at Kale and shaking his head.
"Kale, why would you do such things of terror? You should be ashamed of yourself." whispered the old King as he stood by the door, knowing Kale would still hear him.
"Why should I? After all you have done to my parents? I will never forgive you!" scream Kale.
"They deserved their deaths.Your father is the Thief King's left hand commander. He has killed so many people. My daughter was in love with that dangerous man and sided with him against me. I had absolutely no choice but to kill both of them." explained the old king.He did not even look at Kale,just looking down.
"And just because of love, love for someone other than yourself, you can find the heart to kill your own daughter? You are nothing but a beast.You don't deserve to be my grandfather." Kale spit, struggling hard against the chains that held him until cuts and abrasion begun to appear on his hand.
"With an attitude like this, you will never inherit my throne. Commander Kylrin will inherit my throne.After all, he is the one I trust the most." declared the King and left after ordering the two guards in the cell to search Kale's body.
"What a waste! He is a very brave person and looks rather compatible with Princess Jessica." said one of the guards to the other guard as they searched Kale's body.
"I agree. Too bad he is going to be executed tomorrow " said the other guard. After hearing this, Kale stiffened in fear.
The second guard found an orb with a patterns made of skulls emblazoned on it from inside Kale's robes.
"This must be the source of his necromancy. Now his power will be greatly decreased." exclaimed one of the guard as he removed it from Kale's possession and the two guards left, satisfied that they have done something good.
Several hours later, the night grew old and the guard with the keys fell asleep at his post.
Kale looked around and saw a dead mouse at the corner of the far side of the cell, it had died due to hunger.
Focusing with all his might, Kale managed to bring the dead mouse back to life and silently commanded the dead mouse to steal the key from the guard. But the undead mouse easily grabbed the ring of keys but on its way back to Kale, it suddenly bounced against an invisible barrier and could not proceed. There seemed to be a magical barrier against all undead in front of the gate.
"I only have remaining a little bit of mana. What I can do with this little amount of mana?" mumbled Kale to himself. Suddenly,an idea struck him.
He commanded the mouse to climb out of the cell through the window of the prison and circle back towards his cell's window. The key was finally in his hands,he formed a hand of magic to hold and twist the key to open the door.
And soon as Kale tried to go out, the magical barrier against undead flashed and pushed Kale forcefully out. Kale smiled.
He saw the guard was still sleeping.He took hold of a sword from the weapon's rack and stabbed the napping guard in the back while covering the poor man's mouth. After ensuring the guard was dead, he took the guard's armour and clothes and began to walk out of the castle. | Location: Field of ten million deaths
Time: 5:00 PM
Horns resounded through the air calling the orcish allies to war.
Wind blew over the grassy fields that would soon drink blood.
"Attack, my fellow orcs. Show those elves who are the mightier race. Once we have defeated them, nothing can stop us from conquering the forest! " bellowed the orc general, Sauron, who was leading the way to the enemy fortress.
5,000 orcs and orges charged forward towards the lands of the elves at full strength and bloodlust.
The elven archers raised their bows. Though their good marksmanship and rapid reload served them well, and almost half of their enemies fell while still charging, the orcs and orges still managed to reach and penetrate the wall.
The mighty strength of orges easily collapsed the fortress walls. But some of the elven bowman leapt aside in time to avoid being crushed.
As the dust from the fallen wall settled, an army of three thousand forest keepers dashed towards the rubble with amazing speed and began to slice their way through the barbarian army.
Soon, all of the orcs that made it through the wall were dead and those that did not had escaped. The elves had manage to drive the invaders off. All except a single orc.
That orc had run deeper into the forest, deeper into the elven kingdom.
Surprisingly, the gates to the capital opened for him without hassle or challenge. A druid come out and, uttering a spell of alteration, changed the orc into an elf.
"What did you see inside that putrid camp?" asked the elven captain of the guard.
"There is nothing much of importance in the camp but their reinforcements have not been depleted. There stands a portal that opens a link to their kingdom. It appears that their orge magi have invented a teleportation device." declared the elven spy "They are planning to send a group of orcs and ogres, including the general's son, Xinj, to retrieve a powerful artifact called the Cross of Death."
"The Cross of Death?! Command all high priests and sages in the city to research more information on the Cross of Death." shouted the elven captain to a messenger.
The messenger ran to deliver the captain’s orders to the library, causing it to be caught up in a frenzy of chaos for a while at the news
Finally, despite the efforts of two thousand high priests, only 1 of them could come out with any result of the Cross of Death. "This is the page that you should show to the Captain" declared the solitary high priest holding open a very, very thick book.
The messenger nodded and added a bookmark to the page before rushing back to the captain.
On the page was written:
Cross of Death
This is a mystery artrifact used by many kings in the frozen kingdoms of the north. The name of this kingdom has been lost to the ages. Any king who wears it will possess great power, the power drawn form all the kings who has come before him. This power comes at one price though; once the owner of the Cross of Death is dead, the entire soul of the owner will be transferred into the crown.
If the crown's ownership is changed before the original owner is dead, a miracle will occur. After that, whoever is in possession of the Cross of Death will be able to make a deal with the Cross of Death
"A miracle will occur…. Hmm, the power of kings sounds very amazing and intimidating." muttered the captain "But what can someone do with all this power once they are dead? The deal is worth nothing." | | this story is addicting than the game for me. GOOD WORK! | Sorry for the ancient.I go for more games and movies to collect ideas.
Here it's the thing 1 shot 3 fraction.Make it fast so we can start the real thing.
A young elven archer named Slyvian came into the room and saw the captain reading a book. "What are you reading, Captain? Shouldn't we be trying to obtain information from the spy?" he asked the Captain.
"We have received some information. The orcs are after a rare artrifact called the Cross of Death. It is is an amazing artrifact. I'm worried that it might cause our defeat unless we send our forces to retrieve it as well." replied the Captain and showed Slyvian the book
Slyvian took the book and read the section on the Cross and a look of amazement swept across her face.
"Who are the orcs are sending to retrive this artifact?" asked Slyvian.
"The Orcish General's son, Xinj. He is quite skilled."
"Give me an army of 80 sprites, 50 elite forest keepers, 30 grandmaster bowmen, 40 druids, 20 unicorns and 5 treefolk.Oh...and a good supply of food. I'll settle this" Slyvian told the Captain, fire in her eyes.
"Yes,madam." said the Captain, smiling.
Location Wizard School of Devenshire (In another dimension)
Time: 2:00PM
"Okay students. First, add a teaspoon of essence of blight, a drop of vampire blood and 2 heads of lambu." said the Grand Wizard Master Ahriman standing over a cauldron stirring after adding the ingredients "You will get as a result a teleport potion that can span dimensions. Remember,bring along another potion for the return trip before teleporting because lambus only exist in our dimension."
All of the students were paying attention, all except for one, Zorom.
Zorom was a bully, but a weak spellcaster as he never paid attention during class.Thus, he has always failed most of his tests.
Ahriman suddenly called out Zorom's name, disrupting his daydreaming "ZOROM!You are not paying attention again!"
Zorom shrieked out loud in fear.
"You will be punished for your insolence unless... yes, unless you can tell me how to make a Dimensional Teleport Potion." declared Ahriman.
All the students in the class turned and looked at Zorom and his face almost turned absolutely red but no answer could come out of Zorom's mouth.
"Great, since you do not know how, your punishment will be cleaning the entire classroom after school." Ahriman announced
A prefect named Reeve looked at Zorom and smiled. Zorom glared back with a look of utter anger because Reeve always caught Zorom bullying other students and it was Reeve that brought Zorom to the teachers for punishment. Zorom considered Reeve his nemesis.
After the class ended, all the students returned to their rooms for a well-deserved rest, all except for Zorom, who needed to clean up the classroom with Grand Wizard Master Ahriman watching. Just then, another teacher passed by the classroom and called out to Ahriman, asking him some question and distracting him from overseeing Zorom.
While Grand Wizard Master Ahriman was not watching, Zorom took a scoop of the potion using a vial he picked up off the floor and quickly stashed it into his pocket.
He then hurriedly finished up the clean-up of the classroom and returned to his room with his prize.
Location: Room Hall
Time: 3:00AM.
Zorom wakes up from his bed and slowly crept to Reeve's room. Everyone else was asleep in the wee hours of the morning as Zorom opened the bedroom door and found Reeve sleeping soundfully on his bed.
Zorom quickly unstoppered the potion vial and began to pour the potion into unsuspecting Reeve's mouth. Reeve awoke with a shock and began to clamber towards the door to scream for help. But it was too late for as Zorom laughed, Reeve's body started to glow in a bright yellow light and his body began to fade away. | Location: Large Field of Paddy, Candar
Time: 7:00PM
"Look there, darling. It seems that a young man has fainted in our paddy field." shouted an old farmer.
"Oh...Where am I?" moaned Reeve "I have a major headache."
"Oh, look, he has just awakened...How are you, young man?" asked the old woman, rushing to his side.
"I'm fine. But where am I?" Reeve mumbled, clearly disoriented
Reeve stood up slowly and began to look around him. There were several small houses surrounded by a great number of paddy fields. The paddy in the fields were so tall that they were all almost as tall as him.
"You are in the great field of Candar. This is the main supplier of food for the Candarian army." explained the old farmer.
"Candar…?" Reeve turned away from the farmer and mumbled to himself "Oh yes, I drunk that teleport potion. Damn that Zorom. This very well may be my fate to be here..."
"Wait, can I know what world this is?" asked Reeve, turning back to the old couple.
"Candar." the old farmer said, confused
"No, I mean what is the name of the dimension. The name of the world."
"Whoa, you mean you don't know your own world's name. This is Grand Earth."
"Grand Earth...I read about that before in the Millennium Library. There is an artifact in this world called the Cross of Death. That artifact would definitely come in very handy." mumbled Revee to himself again.
"Sir, can you get me some iron. And some stones?"asked Reeve politely.
"Sure...How much you need?" the old man replied
"A massive amount of roughly 200 bags of iron and 200 bags of stones."
"Whoa there, you are asking for a large amount." the farmer's wife piped up.
"Yes, but I have the gold to pay. And I have some food on me as well."
Reeve reached into his robes and took out large bags of gold and gave to the farmer. The farmer's wife started wistfully at the gold with a look of greed but the old farmer was an honest man and he verbally forbade his wife from taking a single penny from the bags of gold beyond what was owed them.
The farmer then rushed to the market and brought as much iron and stone that Reeve had asked for. And the rest went to the cost of the food.
The farmer returned with a few men who were assisting him to carry the load of the resources.
"Thanks, here is your reward." declared Reeve, giving him bigger bags of gold then the ones he had previously given to him earlier. | | then he build an army of golems lol | | and the army of golems destroyed Candar and ruled there with their King,Reeve....lol | | and then Zorom came with Gremlin Engineers and destroyed the golems and then he ruled over them | With those resources in hand,Reeve set off on his journey.
Location: Tavern of Silence Hill
Time:8:00 AM
Cross Spericole walked into the tavern. The small tavern had only 5 customers, 2 bartenders and a small band of musicians in the corner.
"Gimme a jug of Tuda Wine." ordered Cross.
"Welcome sir,your drink will be served in a minute." replied one of the bartenders.
The bartender took out a jug labelled "TUDA WINE", poured it out for Cross and he downed it in a single gulp.
"Though Tuda wine is called a wine and has a great taste, it is not alcoholic, why did you order it?" asked the bartender that served him.
"I don't drink alcohol. And I'm waiting for my partner to appear."said Cross.
After an hour of waiting, Cross's partner had not appeared.
"Damn Yuki.I guess she has gone to buy things with our reward money." mumbled Cross.
The bartender overheard what Cross had mumbled and leaned over to ask "Reward money? Does that mean you are a bounty hunter?".
"Yes, why?"asked Cross.
"We've got a job for you, interested?" replied the bartender.
"Sure. But what is the reward,? A mug of tuda wine won't do, you know."
"How about 2 barrels of Tuda Wine and a bag of 200 gold coins?"
"Hmm, tell me the details about the target of this bounty."
"Well, he is half-human half-angel. He been extorting us for months.We have lost almost 1000 gold to him by now and if this continues,we will go bankrupt."
"Hmm, this sounds like a dangerous mission"
"Remember, he is only a half-angel. So,he ihas only half of an angel's power. His wings are smaller and he possesses weaker healing powers than an angel normally has. So I think the reward should be lower than that of a hit on a normal angel" explained the bartender.
"You are right. So it'll be half the price of an angel. I will go off now. If a girl asks where I am, tell her to wait for me here." said Cross as he stood to leave.
As soon as Cross left, one of the bartender whispered to the other, "Is he trustworthy?"
The other whispered back "I have a hawk spying on him. If he doesn't do the job, the hawk will call all his hawk friends and attack him"
Location:Angel's Lair(Old Church)
Time: 8:34AM
"If the map serves correctly, this is the place."
The church is quite old and is widely spaced. An image of the God of Death is stained onto the glass. The sheer presence of Darkness fill the spaces between the walls.
"Strange, it's just the start of the day and already it's very dark in here."mumbled Cross.
Then a shadow passed by Cross' edge of vision with lightning speed, but he noticed it easily and carried on, pretending he never seen the shadow.
As Cross walked towards an emblem of a skull on the far wall of the church, a spear suddenly shot out from behind him
Cross quickly spun around and with a quick swish of his hand, grabbed a hold of the spear.Then, he immediately launched it back to the shooter.
A loud roar echoed thorugh the old church "Arrghhh. My wings. Damn it! I'm hurt. Attack,my reapers, Kill the intruder!" |
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